Welcome to our amazing class blog. We are Totara 2 and our teacher is Miss Hines. We're a class of Year 7 and 8 students in Totara at Grey Main School in Greymouth, New Zealand.
Kia ora Totara 2. I really liked your speech time post. I thought that it really showed how to form a speech. I really liked how you used adjectives in the exact places that gave an impact. This really changed my view on speeches. Next time try and add more info. What order do the paragraphs go in? How do you introduce your topic? Otherwise that's all. There is nothing else to change here. Keep up the good work. I loved your advice and I will be sure to use it in the future. Nice work Totara 2. Your work was awesome.Arly from Karoro school.
Thank-you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comment.